After reviewing my first draft, I made a few changes and alterations to create this final piece. My main intentions where to specify the style and genre more to establish the theme of a real life documentary. I believe I have completed this by altering the script. The key features I have adapted are:
- Made the WHAT clearer. “tonight, we visit the most haunted public house in Somerset” and “ join me, Jason Jervis, as I investigate the Ring ‘O’ Bells”
- Made the WHY clearer. “our aim, to discover the truth behind reports of paranormal activity”
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